(Not a proper) haiku

Yes, I can show you,

but it’s better if you can

find out for yourself.

I wrote what I thought were all haiku for years before discovering that haiku are about nature and, if using the same principles and format in a poem about people, it should be entitled ‘senryu.’

Probably first published in Reach

 

 

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